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Special Instructions: I am getting better at this (I feel). Please give me as much feedback as you can (the more I get, the better).

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Chameleon

Hi Shane, I think you're definitely improving. The surfaces are generally a lot more meaningful and there are some nice clues here. There are still some problems which I'm sure you'll be able to iron out. Since you've asked for lots of feedback I'm going to send a lot of comments in a reply to this.

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Gollum

Hi Shane. Agree both with you (I think this probably is your best one yet, which is as it should be) and with Chameleon, who has made just about all the feedback comments I'd have wished to make. One thought is that in 6d, some (misleading) punctuation, as "...coo 'Bedlam Barbecue'..." might make the surface work better. Similarly inserting a comma in 24d, for instance. But there are some very neat ones in here, notably 4a (superb), 29a (a good misdirection), 14d, 23d.